Could have been completely done without the cursing, though, other than maybe the line "I'm just some f*cking guy." That was needed to juice up the line. But otherwise, the cursing took away from the rest of the "subtext as text" laughs, rather than enhancing them (i.e. if the abbreviation BS had been used throughout, the comedy would have lost nothing.)
So I give it an 8, "which is just an arbitrary number designed to make it seem like I have a smart, reliable rating system for a comedy bit I have no particular expertise judging."